tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post7870527994268960512..comments2023-03-25T11:44:23.411+00:00Comments on FICTION VICTIM, TOO: FRIDAY FICTIONEERS - 9 of March - THE COLOUR LIME - My 100 Words - from Linda PalundLinda Palundhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10306701232418627061noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-81548006330638725232012-03-13T20:43:56.686+00:002012-03-13T20:43:56.686+00:00Linda, I think I like this one best of all your so...Linda, I think I like this one best of all your sotries so far! It had such emotion and a tremendous amount of story before and after this 100 words. Even with the absurdity of lime skin, I was there.Madison Woodshttp://madisonwoods.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-90577072012346448962012-03-12T14:33:31.699+00:002012-03-12T14:33:31.699+00:00We have to do something about that lime-colored sk...We have to do something about that lime-colored skin. Perhaps a tequila bath would lighten the pigment.<br /><br />Great story. I'm ready for the battle scene.Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-47184575370804852672012-03-11T09:10:53.190+00:002012-03-11T09:10:53.190+00:00A good mix of narrative and dialogue, finely balan...A good mix of narrative and dialogue, finely balanced. Good read. <br /><br />http://www.castelsarrasin.wordpress.comSandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-83608412400490271862012-03-11T08:47:39.858+00:002012-03-11T08:47:39.858+00:00This is excellent, Linda, a blend of alternate uni...This is excellent, Linda, a blend of alternate universe, love story, discrimination, and adventure.Judeehttp://writetuit.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-70802018790094525942012-03-11T06:45:49.728+00:002012-03-11T06:45:49.728+00:00Well done! It's exciting to see how our imagi...Well done! It's exciting to see how our imaginations can be ignited by others. Limeskins -- loved the image that evoked. Big thank you for visiting my site, also.Palooski65https://www.blogger.com/profile/12635395881961075975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-68636657891838842432012-03-10T22:20:44.409+00:002012-03-10T22:20:44.409+00:00Very poignant. I also get a Holocaust/French Resis...Very poignant. I also get a Holocaust/French Resistance Fighter feel from this piece. Well done story!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05504298750127152026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-67933146250425780372012-03-10T19:29:37.933+00:002012-03-10T19:29:37.933+00:00Excellent use of dialog to tell and dark and sinis...Excellent use of dialog to tell and dark and sinister story. And you bring the reader to the perfect point so that the story is completed in the reader's mind. Great story!<br />Here's mine: http://bridgesareforburning.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-86583190578929618932012-03-10T06:42:50.017+00:002012-03-10T06:42:50.017+00:00Thanks, Doug. Now let's see your offering - on...Thanks, Doug. Now let's see your offering - on a lighter note...Linda Palundhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10306701232418627061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-81703798743349131032012-03-10T05:29:19.254+00:002012-03-10T05:29:19.254+00:00Dear Linda,
Imagine my surprise as I read your st...Dear Linda,<br /><br />Imagine my surprise as I read your story and then your explanation of the origin of its title and idea. Thanks for saying so. Made me smile in appreciation.<br /><br />The Lime is right about For Whom the Bell Tolls. Final lines and all. Very evocative and very well done.<br /><br />Aloha,<br /><br />DougDouglas MacIlroyhttp://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-36258466108506643912012-03-10T02:35:38.545+00:002012-03-10T02:35:38.545+00:00Going out in a blaze of fire. Almost Braveheart l...Going out in a blaze of fire. Almost Braveheart like. I enjoyed it. <br /><br />My attempt: http://unduecreativity.wordpress.com/2012/03/08/hiding/C.C.http://ccarothers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-39672026360464380152012-03-09T21:32:33.133+00:002012-03-09T21:32:33.133+00:00I got a serious Holocaust vibe from this. I can&#...I got a serious Holocaust vibe from this. I can't imagine the horror of being hunted for who you are - religion, skin color, ethnicity. Very well written piece.<br /><br />~Susan (Here's mine: http://www.susanwenzel.com/)Susan Wenzelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05441251619321494571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-74570970147847780602012-03-09T20:56:46.721+00:002012-03-09T20:56:46.721+00:00That's a good thing to say, and a good thing t...That's a good thing to say, and a good thing to remember. "It tolls for thee" is the right answer.<br />Thank you for appreciating it.<br />LindauraLinda Palundhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10306701232418627061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-70182347576720859442012-03-09T19:44:45.479+00:002012-03-09T19:44:45.479+00:00ALL HAIL THE LIMESKINS!!
Haha! I love that you w...ALL HAIL THE LIMESKINS!! <br /><br />Haha! I love that you were so scrappy this week and pulled in other things that have variously inspired you. I do that all the time and it hardly ever turns out so well as yours did! There's something in this that reminds me of "For Whom the Bell Tolls" and that's not a bad likeness to have :)The Limehttp://www.thecolorlime.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-11168528896838757412012-03-09T19:25:47.105+00:002012-03-09T19:25:47.105+00:00The Guns of Brixton indeed. Protecting everyone&#...The Guns of Brixton indeed. Protecting everyone's humanity at the cost of our own. I think cooperation is the path to success rather than competition, sadly for the Limeskins but rather happily for the ants (and the bees, who will take us down with them).carloshttp://repuestodelatabla.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3072297827426071248.post-3532263125721955962012-03-09T17:41:06.979+00:002012-03-09T17:41:06.979+00:00Loved the underlying theme of this story.
Here...Loved the underlying theme of this story.<br /><br />Here's mine: http://teschoenborn.com/2012/03/09/friday-fictioneers/T.E.Schoenbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05618470366896573356noreply@blogger.com